Life Around The Corner

Choosing Life and Operating Happiness


My love is like an ice shelf
Overheating in the warm sun.

Conditions it cannot control
Weaken it to the point
It cracks from the inside out.

As my first piece breaks
There is a tremendous sound,
Everything falls down,
And drowns
In a dark, blue ocean
Overheating in the warm sun.

Nothing is the same,
And I am not the blame.

There is no going back
And my being is now in lack.

A piece of my love
Is void and null.
And now I have to live
As a new whole,

Less love.

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    Rise & shine dear TuT!!

    1. Tut Yashar Avatar

      Good evening, dear Devang πŸ˜ŠπŸ™πŸΌ

      1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar

        Good morning to you

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    1. Tut Yashar Avatar

      Thank you πŸ™πŸΌπŸ˜Š

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    Jim W.


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  4. Lamittan Minsah Avatar

    This is a beautiful piece, poignant and visceral in every way. ❀

    1. Tut Yashar Avatar

      Thank you, Dear Lamittan πŸ˜ŠπŸ™πŸΌβ€οΈ

      1. Lamittan Minsah Avatar

        Feel much welcome, Tut. ❀

  5. Amber Avatar

    Beautiful imagery, I love it!πŸ’–

    1. Tut Yashar Avatar

      Thank you so much, Amber πŸ™πŸΌβ€οΈ

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