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Rhyme Time

I want to be okay,
I really do.

Still, all types of feelings
I do not know to contain,
Come out from deep inside me,
Again and again and again.

It can be happiness or pain,
Complicated or plain,
I want to control them
Through my brain.

Maybe for me not to drain,
Or feel as if I’m chained,
I can’t try to force domain,
But, ride forward like I’m a train.

Accept myself as I am,
Lift my character with a love crane,
My emotional reactions begin to wane,
From here will come my gain.

I want to be okay,
I really am.

17 responses to “Rhyme Time”

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  1. Lamittan Minsah Avatar

    I love the end rhyme. You’re right here, control is the best tool.

    1. Tut Yashar Avatar

      Thank you so much, Lamittan πŸ™πŸΌπŸ˜ŠπŸ’•

      1. Lamittan Minsah Avatar

        Feel most welcome, Tut.

  2. Devang Upadhyaya Avatar

    It’s good that you are addressing this thing.
    I want you to be happy and satisfied. πŸ™‚

    1. Tut Yashar Avatar

      Same here 😊

  3. GraceoftheSun Avatar

    Wonderful piece. Love the rhymes.πŸ’•

    1. Tut Yashar Avatar

      Thank you so much Grace, I’m happy you like it πŸ˜Šβ€οΈπŸ™πŸΌ

      1. GraceoftheSun Avatar

        I sure did. My pleasure.πŸ’•

      2. Tut Yashar Avatar

        β€οΈπŸ’—

  4. Jim W. Avatar
    Jim W.

    Good rhymes, a metaphor, an analogy….only people who are OKAY to begin with want to be okay….don’t worry πŸ›πŸ›πŸ›

    1. Tut Yashar Avatar

      Thank you so much Jim, i tell myself that and it’s also very good to hear from you. This morning has had so many feelings and I’m only during my first coffee lol. So I have to remind myself to calm down πŸ˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ™πŸΌπŸ’—β€οΈ

      1. Jim W. Avatar
        Jim W.

        I had a migraine for about 6 hours last night ..I’m still recovering…I tried to do too much yesterday…today I stay in bed and take things one inch at a time πŸ›πŸ›πŸ›

      2. Tut Yashar Avatar

        Sounds like a very good plan to me! And I hope today your head will feel as soft as cotton candy

      3. Jim W. Avatar
        Jim W.

        Thanks same to you…🐦🐦🐦

      4. Tut Yashar Avatar

        Thank you 😊 πŸ›πŸ¬

  5. Amber Avatar

    I can relate. Beautiful rhyming.✨Thank you for sharing.❀️

    1. Tut Yashar Avatar

      Thank you Amber, I’m happy you like it 😊❀️

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