
When I look at you through
My hurting soul
It seems as if taking from me
Is your end goal.
When I look at you through
My loving heart
I see we are not so far apart.
I want to give you, for a start.
Understanding,
A helping hand,
Acceptance,
No demand.
These are things I am lucky to receive.
They make me feel appreciative.
And when I turn to give,
I want to believe,
I am not naive,
And you can perceive
That you can grow beyond your grief,
And feel true relief.
I donβt want to seem vain,
When it comes to reducing your pain.
But it should be understood,
I want to make you feel good.
I know you walk your own lane,
And this is how you will always remain.
Still, I will be by you
When it shines and when it rains.
WRITTEN: APR 26, 2022
26 responses to “Real Talk”
Beautiful and heartfelt! I love this, Tut! π
Thank you so much, Eugenia! Iβm happy you like it πππ
My pleasure, Tut!
πβ€οΈπ
Wow. A gorgeous poem, Tut. Amazing ending. ππ
Thank you so much Jeff ππππΌπ
Wonderful writing
Beautiful writing. Love always remains and friendship is always willing to walk beyond any adversities there may be.
Delighted to read you.
Best regards.
Thank you so much my friend, I am so happy you like it and I agree with you ππΌπ love is stronger than anything
Looking through your loving heart and through your hurting soulβ¦ two sides of the same coin, both choices we make! Amazing how different things can look dβΓ©peron the point of view we are standing on!
Yes exactly ππ Also the take vs. give connects to our point of view.
Absolutely! Everything exists in the same sphere! Itβs what we choose to focus on which determines how we feel!!
Yes π
Last two lines were so beautiful- Still, I will be by you
When it shines and when it rains, what a lovely message.
Keep sharing and remember to smile.
Thank you Devang Iβm glad you like it πππΌ Smile too
lovely soul β€οΈ
Thank you Jim you made me smile big ππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈ
good, keep smiling ππ
π€π€π€
π³π³π³π³π³
Hahaha you are surprised I kept smiling?
I hope you smile today too π
thanks dear β€οΈβ€οΈ
πβ€οΈ
This is real talk indeed. Reaches down my heart with an infinite strength. I love it.
Thank you!! Iβm so happy you love it πππΌπ
Sure. I do. You’re much welcome. πππ