
Iβm trying to tell you that I love you,
You never learned to listen.
Iβm trying to show you that I love you,
You never gained clear sight.
Iβm trying to kiss you because I love you,
You are not familiar with the taste of love.
Iβm trying to let you feel my heartbeat,
You donβt have a heart to compare it to.
WRITTEN: MAY 27, 2018
15 responses to “Senses”
A poem written with full of love with true emotions!!! Honest share
Thank you!!
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share great posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you had a great day!! ππππΉ
I like the very first one here, the importance of listening, or on this medium, the importance of reading and then trying to absorb.
Thank you so much for reading and sharing as well ππΌ yes, many times it happened when we try to communicate ourselves to someone who wants to hear us, but doesnβt have the tools to do so. Here, gladly like you say we have the ability to absorb in our pace and take things in. Some people donβt know how to listen, love, process feelings.
You did a lovely job of describing such an emotional experience. β€οΈThank you for sharing.
Thank you so much! Iβm happy you like it πππΌβ€οΈ
Thatβs painful, and beautifully expressed. ππ
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Youβre most welcome. Always. ππ
Oooh, so visceral and appealing. I felt it close to my heart. This is beautiful and awesome my friend. π
Thank you so much, my friend π I am happy you like it πππΌ
Oh amazing! Feel most welcome, dear. π